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WhiteNoiseGhost Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Dayum.. everything in your gallery is so amazing!!
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TTLee Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
come! jump into the portal!..the portal of knowing something you didnt know before  www.youtube.com/watch?v=160Gmn…
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CaptainRazer Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Are you ready for constructive criticism?
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vicse Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sure....?
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CaptainRazer Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Judging from your latest works, You're adding unnecessary details to your artwork, particularly the line art! As a cartoonist you should always make it simple! While I'm aware that cartoons can be more than that (Such as Anime or Marvel comics which tend to be more realistic), but in case of MLP simplicity is always a good addition.

And you need to work on colors as well, while my suggestion is to buy the book "Colors" by Betty Edwards, it is a good thing to experiment on your own, work on colors and messing with filters and layer blend mode could possibly open new gates for improvements.

Finally, no offence dude, I don't know what people will think about it, but I personally find the way you do the eyelashes are a bit annoying. Could be a matter of taste though, don't take it personally!
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Here-for-the-ponies Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I'm sorry, but this critique is bad. The elements you listed in the first paragraph
fall under aesthetic, as their use doesn't impact how effective the meaning of the
piece is conveyed. Also, you were very vague in the second paragraph in what you
were critiquing, as you only gave suggestions on what to do, and not what those
suggestions would improve.
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vicse Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I get what you mean but as for detail it is what I like most in art esp cartoons. As for colors I'm not sure what that meant but I have been starting when I have the freedom to try some more grades and blends. And for the lashes they stay for now tho styles change so who knows how long they will stay. I get mostly good some not about them but I'll change them when I feel like changing my style. For the most part I steer away from show style. Ty for the input though I hope to improve my colors.
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blueMALOU Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
:iconawesome-plz::gallery::D:
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vicse Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you ! :D
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blueMALOU Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
:iconxauplz::iconwelcomeplz:
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